What a wonderful story Niko. I love that you didn't stop at the end of the slide and kept writing instead. You extended and elaborated on your ideas. Awesome!
Fantastic story Niko. You had everything a good story needs. A problem that needed solving, with a great beginning, middle and ending. Moonmelon and space cakes.... yuuum. I like that you added a picture of your spaceship leaving, on the last slide too.
What a wonderful story Niko. I love that you didn't stop at the end of the slide and kept writing instead. You extended and elaborated on your ideas. Awesome!
ReplyDeleteFantastic story Niko. You had everything a good story needs. A problem that needed solving, with a great beginning, middle and ending. Moonmelon and space cakes.... yuuum. I like that you added a picture of your spaceship leaving, on the last slide too.
ReplyDeletethank you :)
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