This is very imaginative Niko, great job! I like how you have experimented with using paragraphs! The capital letters are in the right places too, good job. Can you read through the first paragraph and see if there is a spot where you could add another comma?
This is very imaginative Niko, great job! I like how you have experimented with using paragraphs! The capital letters are in the right places too, good job. Can you read through the first paragraph and see if there is a spot where you could add another comma?
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